Thursday, August 07, 2008


I've also changed the title to Cage Fighter.

"CAGE FIGHTER" is the story of a mix-martial-arts fighter turned secret agent who gets deeply involved in the politics of an alien planet.

In the SCI-FI folder:


Dave said...

I guess that I shouldn't way things like this but someone complained that alien surnames and planet names are all "consonants and apostrophes" and sound like "sneezes at best, puking at worst."
Hence the very vowel-like "Hoydoycloo.

Bernita said...

Think this has promise, Dave.

Dave said...

Thanks. I like the way this story unfolds. most of it is first draft-(ish) and I want to change a few things before I post any of it.

I'm thinking hard about how to start the story.

Bernita said...

Dave, you have the most marvellous imagination for characters, settings and vivid details.

And I want to thank you for your good wishes.
He's resting uncomfortably.

Dave F. said...

Thank You.

Dave F. said...

The time has come to change the entry. This is the old text.

Oh yeah, sure! I had an ending in mind. IT SUCKED. I've reworked half of the story line and this might actually see the light of day.

Yakmat and the Hoydoycloo Bar is a story about a cage fighter on an alien planet.
Somewhat over 10,000 words and I have the ending in mind. I just have to put it to paper.

Natalie said...

Just wanted to drop in and say thanks again for your help over at EE. You gave such good advice that helped me put the letter in the right direction.

Dave F. said...

You are very welcome. I'm glad my advice helped. Good Luck.