Sunday, September 13, 2009

(WT 61) Goats

I thought of a great opening lines to start a story:
I warned you boy's not to drink old man dickface's moonshine but you boys could never listen to what your elders tell ya.
Why don't you go back to your hovel and play with your cats, you old crone.
Mouth breathing moron in a baseball cap with droopy pants.
Yips
Voodoo mammy got the power of baron sahmedi

These lines may not end up in the final draft but it's inspirational.

2 comments:

Nemo said...

Satyrs maybe?

Dave F. said...

Possibly. I've been tied up working on another story and I haven't thought hard about this idea yet. I just know that opening is too fierce to pass up or forget.